Pesbo Pearl Pirie's Poetry Journal ([info]pearlformance) wrote,
@ 2006-09-23 16:14:00
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my plant song man
my plant song man

frog thumb prophet I am grateful.
if it were not for your level-eye,
shrugged shoulders of action,
I would be surrounded by the pale
stalks of my transgressions.

you don't get taken in by my verbiage of,
the houseplants are stable, ie:
in a state where they do not wilt or rot,
beyond need for misting or watering,
a dusting if you must be particular
about appearances.

you do not chastise but gaze with slight
private smiled head-shake of kindness,
wordlessly replenish the clay
with hungry roots you pay for
out of pocket, energy, time

each of your visits is rain




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Part of Ringing of the Bards XIV

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(Anonymous)
2006-09-24 06:39 pm UTC (link)
Oooo. I love that last line, "each of your visits is rain". What a nice image to end with.

--Daniel

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(Anonymous)
2006-09-24 11:30 pm UTC (link)
This is a truly striking poem. Thank you for sharing. May I link to it on my Greening Security site?

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